I can swim
But not very well
In deep water
I drown as well
Funny thing is
No one can tell
I've been drowning
While everyone is well
Deep under water
I really cant breathe
Losing energy
I stop moving
Losing the hope
That someone may save me
Drowning
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only60sGirlInItaly
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Re: Drowning
this reminded me of one of my friends. Thank you stranger for 11 years ago, I'll go check on him.. beautifully written. The contrast between the writing style and the contents is bittersweet. Nice! hope ur doing better now..

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