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iamnobody
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Joined: Thu Oct 29, 2015 11:06 am

Drowning

Postby iamnobody » Thu Oct 29, 2015 12:21 pm

I can swim
But not very well

In deep water
I drown as well

Funny thing is
No one can tell

I've been drowning
While everyone is well

Deep under water
I really cant breathe

Losing energy
I stop moving

Losing the hope
That someone may save me

only60sGirlInItaly
Posts: 3
Joined: Sun May 03, 2026 3:34 pm

Re: Drowning

Postby only60sGirlInItaly » Sun May 03, 2026 3:48 pm

this reminded me of one of my friends. Thank you stranger for 11 years ago, I'll go check on him.. beautifully written. The contrast between the writing style and the contents is bittersweet. Nice! hope ur doing better now.. 8) :)


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