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Aww. Thankyou very much, Sara! It's funny how you mention my 'innocent words.' The poetry that's easiest for me to write tends to be sad and bleak; I do a better job in writing THAT particular kind! This time, since I'm writing short poems, (Haiku) I thought I'd mostly describe nature. By the way, Haiku poetry is simply a style of poetry where the first line has 5 syllables. The second line has 7 syllables, and the third line has 5. So, it's a bit tricky in conveying all that you'd wish to say. Also, as you probably saw, I was just plain silly with some that I wrote-- purposefully! Haha. I'ts good to hear from you saragupta.
Thanks again.
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Us
Woodland beasts slumber.
Humanity robs. Rapes.Kills.
And, animals sleep.
Wolves
Crimson fangs flashing.
Silver eyes avert the moon,
Bloody carcass. Still.
Woodland beasts slumber.
Humanity robs. Rapes.Kills.
And, animals sleep.
Wolves
Crimson fangs flashing.
Silver eyes avert the moon,
Bloody carcass. Still.
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Snap; twig under foot
or is it, my heart, my mind
Anon I'm found out
Not that anyone cares
They glance to; they glance away
Too much too little
Or is it the snap
Of things falling to focus
Or never will be
Snap a rubber band
Lightly round stack of note cards
Summarize my life
A small stack it is
Easily held in your plam
Was born he and died
Still wondering snap
There are things without meaning
So what do I seek
Nothing to see here
I wish to be on my way
I need a mission
or is it, my heart, my mind
Anon I'm found out
Not that anyone cares
They glance to; they glance away
Too much too little
Or is it the snap
Of things falling to focus
Or never will be
Snap a rubber band
Lightly round stack of note cards
Summarize my life
A small stack it is
Easily held in your plam
Was born he and died
Still wondering snap
There are things without meaning
So what do I seek
Nothing to see here
I wish to be on my way
I need a mission
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