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Just one poem ...

Posted: Wed Jun 23, 2010 2:36 pm
by Dexter
There in these plains
nothing is the way it stands
yet it seems ok
but who can see whats inside of it
there nobody knows why it is
yet recognize the way it is

what made it feel like that
being able to understand
knowing others pain
yet itself feels something else
what changed it to this
seeing things with eyes clearly

was there anything to begin with
the speck of light and dark
nothingness was found
eternal yet unliving
it's lost and wondering
what is the right way to be

Posted: Wed Jun 23, 2010 6:35 pm
by Obayan
Very nice Dexter! Thank you for sharing this with us.

Posted: Thu Jun 24, 2010 3:11 am
by Dexter
Thanks obaya,this was first poem i tried : )

Posted: Thu Jun 24, 2010 4:01 am
by Obayan
Keep it up. I know I'd really like to hear more.

Posted: Thu Jun 24, 2010 10:19 am
by Warmsoul/Jeanie13
(((((((((((( Dexter ))))))))))))))))

First time? Excellent!!! Thank you for sharing and I truly hope you will continue to do so.

Warmie