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Do not give up - poem

Posted: Mon Dec 14, 2020 4:33 am
by Saddy
My first poem posting here

Do not give up
When light and darkness clash
When it seems your time is up
And the world turns to ash
When pain seems to be too strong
And help seems far away
Wanting to give up isn’t wrong
But please, wait another day
Tell yourself this every time
When breathing gets too painful
Everything will be just fine
Just live another Day, be faithful
You are cared for, you are loved
From this truth do not hide
So do not spill your own blood
I will never leave your side

I hope it helps someone at least a little bit. Stay strong <3

Re: Do not give up - poem

Posted: Mon Dec 14, 2020 6:39 am
by CamGirl
Wow. That's a nice poem. So sweet and thoughtful of you. A lot of people need to see this. Thank you for your wonderful words.

Re: Do not give up - poem

Posted: Fri Mar 25, 2022 11:29 am
by Nodus
That was honestly perfect.

It reads out so wonderfully, the pace is well created and the duration is not too long. Just reading it aloud makes me feel like a poet haha
Definitely going to share this with another, thank you for bringing such fruitition into this world by words alone.

Re: Do not give up - poem

Posted: Thu Jul 21, 2022 7:09 pm
by Johnny71
Wow so lovely that poem going to keep that and read when I need it most thank you made me a little bit happier

Re: Do not give up - poem

Posted: Wed Oct 12, 2022 3:13 am
by hundal
Wow Lovely Poem I Remember My Childhood Memories.