My first attempt and a poem
Posted: Sat Sep 26, 2020 8:05 pm
I would like to note this is not the first poem I've written but the first one I will attempt to post If i get positive feed back I'll continue to post the ones I have written and will write. I've written these out of person feelings and current problems in life. Please give me your honest opinions and feel free for suggestions. Thank you all for spending your time reading this.
Title: What you did
Date Written: 9/26/2020
Does what you did make you feel beautiful?
Can you feel your heart beat
To leave me here so pitiful
Does what you did feel dutiful
Can you feel my heart weep
To remove me from where my soul belong
Does what you did help you sleep?
Can you feel her heart creep
A love that once flowed so strong
You are a shep
A devil living in a keep
You sang your warsong
A victim of your rage
Like your personal rat you poked through the cage
You tore us apart
Now i feel as if my love can never restart
I can't move on
I can't be strong
I just want to have back my spark.
What you did killed me inside
Because we were happy
Together our hearts would stride
What you did gained you nothing
Selfish karma will haunt you
And I hope it happens with someone just as Loving
Title: What you did
Date Written: 9/26/2020
Does what you did make you feel beautiful?
Can you feel your heart beat
To leave me here so pitiful
Does what you did feel dutiful
Can you feel my heart weep
To remove me from where my soul belong
Does what you did help you sleep?
Can you feel her heart creep
A love that once flowed so strong
You are a shep
A devil living in a keep
You sang your warsong
A victim of your rage
Like your personal rat you poked through the cage
You tore us apart
Now i feel as if my love can never restart
I can't move on
I can't be strong
I just want to have back my spark.
What you did killed me inside
Because we were happy
Together our hearts would stride
What you did gained you nothing
Selfish karma will haunt you
And I hope it happens with someone just as Loving