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skin and ears
Posted: Sat Jun 21, 2008 12:32 pm
by shmuel
Just a few fleeting thoughts about how visually obsessed our world is... would be great to just use our ears for a day or maybe more.
Just for today,lets close our eyes.
Just for today an end to our lies.
Lets not taste,smell or touch.
Let`s be simply skin and ears.
Share our warmth, our fears?
Just for today,lets close our eyes.
Just for today let`s be naked.
Just for today no need to hide
No one sees, smells or touches.
So no need for old time blushes
Just for today,skin and ears
Just for today, lets close our eyes
Posted: Sun Jun 22, 2008 1:29 pm
by Emotional_77
That's really nice shmuel
Posted: Sun Jun 22, 2008 4:59 pm
by Warmsoul/Jeanie13
(((((((( shmuel )))))))))))))))))
Wow! Did you write that?
Nicely done.
Warmie/Jenie13
Posted: Mon Jun 23, 2008 1:38 pm
by shmuel
thanks for your comments Emotional_77 and Warmsoul/Jeanie13.
Much appreciated...
Just one afterthought from me which might help a bit to understand what I`m trying to say with my poem.
"close our eyes" does not mean hiding
Posted: Wed Jun 25, 2008 3:02 pm
by Emotional_77
*hugs shmuel*
Posted: Thu Jun 26, 2008 2:42 pm
by Katietron
Its kind of inappropriate right now, but it seems like everyone here has a talent. I´m envious.
The poem/lyrics are great!
Posted: Fri Jun 27, 2008 7:33 pm
by Emotional_77
katietron that makes two of us!!
Posted: Fri Jun 27, 2008 9:00 pm
by MoMac
make that 3 of us!
Posted: Sun Jul 13, 2008 12:07 pm
by Warmsoul/Jeanie13
((((((((((((( Katietron )))))))))))))))
You are alone. I don't a talented bone in my body.
((((((((((((((((( shmuel ))))))))))))) just a hug for you.
Warmie/Jeanie
Awesome
Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2008 9:18 am
by JudeB
You have the sign of a good poet.
This poem latched onto something in me.
Not sure what it means to me yet, but it will become clearer in time.
Also, Warmsoul DOES have a talent!
Making comments that warm the hearts of others is DEFINITELY a talent!
EVERYBODY has a talent!
Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2008 9:40 pm
by JudeB
Hey All! Everyone has a talent of some kind. We just have to find a way to express it.
hugs to you all!
Posted: Fri Aug 15, 2008 10:33 am
by hey-its-ok
yeah this poem latched into something in me too... but can't put my finger on it... humm... very abstract... but nice....