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Do You Believe?

Posted: Thu Jun 12, 2008 7:17 am
by JovianHalo13
Do you believe me when I say I’m not sad anymore
When I tell you I’m no longer afraid
Do you believe me when I say I don’t cry anymore
That I’m happy with the choices I made

Do you believe me when I say I don’t bleed anymore
When I tell you I no longer need pain
Do you believe me when I say I don’t scream anymore
That I’ve once again begun to feel sain

Do you believe me when I say it doesn’t hurt anymore
When I tell you I no longer believe
Do you believe me when I say I don’t think anymore
That my only choice was to leave

Posted: Thu Jun 12, 2008 7:46 am
by Warmsoul/Jeanie13
(((((((((((((((((((((((((( JovianHalo13 )))))))))))))))))))))))

Warmie 8)

Posted: Thu Jun 12, 2008 5:23 pm
by Emotional_77
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Very meaningful and deep. Thanks for sharing.

Posted: Fri Aug 15, 2008 10:38 am
by hey-its-ok
humm... sorry if i sound stupid... does this poem have a good or bad ending??? can't figure it out...

Posted: Thu Aug 21, 2008 3:34 am
by JovianHalo13
hey-its-ok wrote:humm... sorry if i sound stupid... does this poem have a good or bad ending??? can't figure it out...


Well it's about pretending, letting people believe you're happy when you're not, letting them see you smile when all you want to do is cry.
hiding what you really feel because they don't want to know the truth.

So good or bad ending? i guess it depends on how you read it.

Posted: Thu Aug 21, 2008 4:41 am
by hey-its-ok
ahh..... i've put two and two together, got it.... Thanks Jovian...