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First time iv'e tried to make poetry/Rhymes...

Posted: Tue Oct 05, 2010 1:57 pm
by Atheist
Be aware that this is my very first time doing this, but it all came from my heart and i hope somone likes it :)


Im'a play russian roulette, lets see what i get/
Please place youre bets, this is for my last debt/
You see how i roll, my only way out of the cold/
It's to late to feel sold, i already lost my soul..
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All these fears in me, makes my tears real to see/
The way it makes me feel, is to surreal for me/
This is scaring me, now the world can see..


*hides*

Posted: Tue Oct 05, 2010 4:02 pm
by hollyann
((((((((((Athiest)))))))))))) that it came from your heart is what matters and it is good. I hope that you continue writing it can be such a release. Hugs my friend.

Holly

Posted: Fri Oct 29, 2010 8:28 am
by Atheist
(((((((((((holly))))))))))))

Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 9:28 pm
by WOMBLE
The Heart is the only place good poetry ever comes from.
Hollys right keep writting if your moved to do so, it's a great release and a great way of expressing how/what you feel.
Womble.