A poem..

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ToxicMoon
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A poem..

Postby ToxicMoon » Thu Jul 09, 2009 10:56 pm

How could you?
The anger came first
we broke eachothers hearts
With a few words

Now i know it takes much longer
To heal the wounds that bleed
Im trying to
but without you im incomplete


I never meant to hurt you
My anger is a different person
Its not who i am
But now ive learnt my lesson

Hear my words dont turn away
Im your daughter
Your only daughter..
So stop playing this game.

It hurts.

Monty
Posts: 830
Joined: Wed Jan 14, 2009 3:44 pm
Location: Canada

Postby Monty » Fri Jul 10, 2009 1:46 am

You expressed your feelings, in a very poignant way.

Though the poem wasn't very long, we can get and idea just how the situation is all hurting you. Sounds like it is right to the core

You write well.

Keep posting if you feel comfortable. Know it can be difficult to let people into your lilfe, when you feel that one of the most important people there, is shutting you out. A lot of feelings in there.

We all read well.


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