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4EverMe
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Postby 4EverMe » Sat Aug 10, 2013 11:55 am

Love songs ever last-
Tears now fall for days long passed.
Hearing now my past.

4EverMe
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Postby 4EverMe » Sat Aug 10, 2013 12:05 pm

No. I'm not a mess-
Just look like Mr.Lochness,
Trudging through the grudge.
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4EverMe
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Postby 4EverMe » Sat Aug 10, 2013 12:14 pm

Some poems like to rhyme.
Some poems are toilet water.
Sometimes, I don't rhyme.
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4EverMe
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Postby 4EverMe » Sat Aug 10, 2013 12:22 pm

Neighbors can be pigs.
Grunting. Squealing. Off to court...
Lies spew from her snout.

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Postby 4EverMe » Sat Aug 10, 2013 12:27 pm

Stress induced laughter.
Cackling. Sheer insanity.
Please don't make me stop.
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4EverMe
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Postby 4EverMe » Sat Aug 10, 2013 1:36 pm

Fallen for his heart,
A soul I've not laid eyes on...
Grateful he exists..

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Postby 4EverMe » Sat Aug 10, 2013 2:13 pm

Boxes and clutter.
In shambles. Unfamiliar.
My beautiful home.

4EverMe
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Postby 4EverMe » Sat Aug 10, 2013 2:29 pm

Swathed in silver-blue.
Nude. A sway. The waning moon.
Alone. Lake freedom.

4EverMe
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Postby 4EverMe » Mon Aug 12, 2013 6:02 pm

Weeping. Silent sobs.
Footprints dot the river's edge.
Gown inlaid with pearls.
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4EverMe
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Postby 4EverMe » Mon Aug 12, 2013 7:15 pm

Wreaths, soft and fragrant-
Summer roses set to glow.
Crowning lovers heads.

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Postby 4EverMe » Mon Aug 12, 2013 11:41 pm

Arctic winds will blow.
As surely, as we doth know.
Cold hands harbor sorrow.

Shackled now to shame.
And prisoner, to my pain.
Still, I weep your name...

Time cannot reset;
Heart and soul, I love you, yet.
Haunted by regret.

Misery, I see-
With goodbye not wholly free.
Loving you is me.

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Postby 4EverMe » Thu Aug 15, 2013 1:43 pm

Silent night afar...
I wonder what you're doing?
Do I grace your mind?

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Postby 4EverMe » Thu Aug 15, 2013 4:13 pm

Carefree days of youth.
Twilight hours. Misty intrigue.
Friends who bid farewell.
Lessons we did learn.
Creatures caught, through much time sought-
Love meant setting free.
Innocence is gone
And more precious to forgo;
Childhood comes but once.
Buried long by time
She resonates through my soul,
Little girl I know.

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Postby 4EverMe » Thu Aug 15, 2013 4:38 pm

I went to edit the above poem, but my phone suddenly went black on me. When I came back to this page, I no longer saw the EDIT box. Here's a small change I'd like to make to the end of the poem:

Buried deep in time
She resonates through my soul,
Little girl I know.

Attempting to write Haiku, some of my poems are becoming something longer than I planned!

4EverMe
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Postby 4EverMe » Thu Aug 15, 2013 11:39 pm

Labyrinth. Deep and dark.
A crystalline, winter's web.
Wicked sillouettes.


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